Senseless

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    savetomorrow

    savetomorrow Well-Known Member

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    This is a song written by my band Invention of Its Time and we are currently working on a demo to send to Interscope Records. The vocals are sung by Invention of Its Time vocalists Brandon Taylor and Alexandra Hayes. The harmonization with the male and female vocals are awesome and I hope you enjoy the song:

    Senseless

    I can hear you when you whisper
    But you can’t hear me when I scream
    When I yell/ You won’t listen
    You’re living blind but you think you see
    You think you are troubled
    But I have all you’re problems doubled
    You think I’m a freak
    But you’re the one that’s weak

    I’m falling under
    Falling under
    I’m falling under
    Falling under

    I’ve become senseless to
    Things that I’ve sensed before
    (Seems I can’t take this anymore)
    Losing my grip
    You’re crushing me more and more
    (Just walk out of my life and shut the door)

    Is your life a reality?
    Or are you living in a dream?
    I’ve done all these things for you
    But to you they didn’t mean a thing
    For years I have struggled
    These weights on my shoulders have doubled
    Your words don’t make me weak
    They just make you sink

    I’m falling under
    Falling under
    I’m falling under
    Falling under
    I’ve become senseless to
    Things that I’ve sensed before
    (Seems I can’t take this anymore)
    Losing my grip
    You’re crushing me more and more
    (Just walk out of my life and shut the door)

    Please visit purevolume.com/inventionofitstime to download Invention of Its Time songs. The guitars are done by me.
     
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    Methybrea

    Methybrea Well-Known Member

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    Hey, that was pretty good! I'll check your band out!

    BTW: Cool band name :D
     
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    Leslie

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    Cool, can't wait till the song is complete!
     
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    savetomorrow

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    thanks for reading my song
     
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    Crawler

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    Basically a good lyric but... A LOT of your lines are inspired from LP, Evanescence and a bit of Avril...
     
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    intheend1004

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    ......thanks?
     
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    Crawler

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    ......thanks? [/b][/quote]
    ....i don´t know.... ;)
     

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