Faded

A little one i wrote

Every where i look these places with no names
Dressed in coating of fortune and fame
Standing alone in this ring of fire
entrapped in an eternal ring of desire
I feel so faded
Faded

Chorus

Faded is all i am
Every person around
surrounds like a deadly gang
trying to run
trying to hide
but all the time i feel so faded

Wha :mellowyou guys think?

:angry: , or

 

my first thought: its short.
it is, but i think its good.

 

thanx ill try to make my other ones longer!!

peace

 

i think it's really good! but it is kinda short. keep it up!