Part of me

Yes, well this is a quick piece I wrote while bored at school
And I need a new title...

I hear your screams in the distance
In the darkest depths of my head
Soaked in blood, I kneel before you
Internal hungers, never fed

I looked to the sky, from my arms I bled
I felt so alive, wishing I was dead
Holding my part of you inside myself
This was a secret, one I'd never tell

 

Come on dudes!
I need your help!

It's for a school project!

 

My Nightmare?


BTW, Its a wicked poem

 

I like the poem, nice job.

As far as choosing a title...perhaps

Fallen
Conscious
Break Away
Enclosure

..?

 

"Holding A Part Of You"

"Distance"

"A Secret Never Told"

"Between a Bloody Suicide"

"Beneath Tommorrow's Midnight"

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this is realy cool......... name?



Distance is pritty cool

 

Ok..well...I'm not sure.

But thanks for your suggestions!! B)

 

yo dog,i gotta name how about,i bled for u.or summin like that,

 

Hey, I bled for you is a pretty awesome name, I think I'll use that one...!!

 

there is also 'needing to bleed' or like, "I bled a part of you' B)

 

Closure.

i dunno why it just seemed fitting. awesome stuff though

 

I think "Hunger." But I don't know, because when an "artist" writes a poem, they should also know the title of it..