Resentful

I was a little angry I guess. If it doesn't flow well i'm sorry, it's more to me just like a bunch of ramblings.

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it shines before my eyes
revealing the truth within
'ceasing to believe where I begin

resenting what you say
resenting who I am
resenting the world and how it all began
resenting myself
resenting to believe
resenting the lonliness
the words I breathe

everyday self-hatred overcomes these thoughts
replacing the one's that cry with self pity
stop complaining about your self all the time
who cares if your life's so shitty..

 

That's good! Keep up the good work.

Yeah, you should work on the flow of it a little.

 

Yeah i'll be working on that for sure, thanks.


Edit: Eh, reading it over...I don't like it...

 

............................ is that about me?

 

Michele it's you! Woah, too many 'dots' there careful lol. No it's not about you, it's about my Dad. Don't worry.

 

oooh ok

 

It's kind of about alot of things I think, I dunno. But thanks.