I decided rhyming was of no importance this time. I may have rhymed a little bit, but barely. I just felt like writing down how I felt.. at least it made me feel better. Tell me what you think. ------------------- tears fade into the distance, our last goodbyes feed away at our heartache, eating awat at the core, somthing calls me towards your presence, calling me, telling me you feel the same, why does it have to end this way? emptiness feels so full, but not full enough to feel your heart beat, or to feel your radiance enlighten me with a single touch of your hand. Finding words come to no ease, please tell me you'll stay, without you, lonliness rips me away, away into the distance, and never back again.
I love it! Espechially the line, "Emptyness feels so full" That's very true. I like your poems, alot of the lines I'm like WOW haha I know what she means with that. Their very real
lol, Michele, that kind of html doesn't work on here. Fixed it. Thanks Chele, glad you like it! Love ya!