Under A Bleeding Sky

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    Casual D

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    Even though she isn't on these forums, this is for that two faced b*tch Brianna, who broke my heart for the final time last night:

    Under A Bleeding Sky
    Written And Copyrighted by Derek Oswald

    [Verse 1]
    I watch my mind paint these memories in black,
    I’m still scarred from the knife you put in my back,
    Our whole friendship was built on dishonesty,
    You pushed me away so that you could breathe,
    If you need distance I’ll give you the whole world,
    You know I’d rather not watch this all unfurl,
    I should say I’m sorry I couldn’t see the signs,
    Maybe next time I’ll read between the lines.

    [Chorus]
    Do you get joy out of the way you hurt me,
    Does it bring a smile to watch me bleed?
    And can you rest yourself at night now,
    When you think of the way you brought me down?
    Do you even care that you lost your best friend,
    Will my absence make it better in the end?
    And will you come back to me for my help,
    When you’re too afraid to face yourself?

    [Verse 2]
    Seems like you don’t know the real me in the end,
    And I guess things are better off that way,
    It’s not like I need to see your face again,
    Because you act, like you don’t want me,
    But then you come back and lead me on,
    I was too blind to see you were a con,
    I wish you were back to the one I knew,
    Cause right now, I cant stand you..

    [Chorus]
    Do you get joy out of the way you hurt me,
    Does it bring a smile to watch me bleed?
    And can you rest yourself at night now,
    When you think of the way you brought me down?
    Do you even care that you lost your best friend,
    Will my absence make it better in the end?
    And will you come back to me for my help,
    When you’re too afraid to face yourself?

    [Bridge]
    I hope you don’t expect me to get on my knees,
    Never knew shallow people we’re so hard to please,
    I won’t bother myself with coming back this time,
    As far as I’m concerned you already crossed the line
    (x2)

    [Chorus]
    Do you get joy out of the way you hurt me,
    Does it bring a smile to watch me bleed?
    And can you rest yourself at night now,
    When you think of the way you brought me down?
    Do you even care that you lost your best friend,
    Will my absence make it better in the end?
    And will you come back to me for my help,
    When you’re too afraid to face yourself?

    Afraid to face yourself,
    Afraid to face yourself,
    Afraid to face yourself,
    Afraid to face.........yourself.
     
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    :eek:
     
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    :eek: indeed.

    Awesome job... I love it.
     
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    I hate her so much I want to cry man, this is horrible. She was so heartless last night that I just wanted to break her heart like she did to me.

    That chorus was pure heart, just so everyone knows. I imagined I was screaming it in her face.
     
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    What makes that song even more extraordinary is that it's heartfelt and I really respect that. Truly amazing.
     
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    Thank you :). I respect the fact you picked a very good S.E.S song as your name :lol:.
     
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    :lol: Thanks, yes, it's a very good song, also very heartfelt.
     
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    *hugs Derek* :hugz:

    I hope everything will be ok for you. It really sucks that you got treated like that. I really like what you wrote though.
     
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    Thankies Andrea :). I think we should talk over AIM or some ####, you're always so nice to me. :lol:
     
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    I'm lovin' it Derek! Awsome! Awsome! AWSOME! :eek:
     
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    Dude, that was really really good. Sorry about your whole situation. Girls do indeed suck. But don't let it get you too down. You deserve better than that. :)
     
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    Man I know exactly what it feels like. Great job.
     
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    Thanks everyone.
     
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    Nicole just insulted herself. :lol:




    Hey, you insulted me too man. Dat's not 'coo. :mellow:
     
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    Nicole just insulted herself. :lol:




    Hey, you insulted me too man. Dat's not 'coo. :mellow: [/b][/quote]
    Lmfao, yes she said all girls suck.
     
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    Lmfao, yes she said all girls suck. [/b][/quote]
    :lol:
     
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    Cool Derek
     
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    :lol: [/b][/quote]
    Hah okay, let's re-phrase this... Most girls suck. Just not the ones on here anyway. ;)
     
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    Nice. ^_^
     
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    Rephrasing again: Girls who treat people like that really suck.
     

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