Again, it's happened The sun, it has setted Leaving shadows upon hope Leaving nothing to me The sun is gone The darkness enters Hope has left me God has died Nothing left Nothing here In this world of nothingness Stuck in a corner Tears, they fall to ground No light here to shine I don't know what to do I'm all alone I'm so afraid I can't go on It still lingers The rain, it falls The hurt, it stays The water turns red I still remember all the things that were said and done Nothing seems to be able to make it all fade Life seems to be getting harder to live Death creaks the door Life is walking out There's a humming that can be heard Feel the vibrations from it The sky seems to close in Watch the clouds come apart The wind blows against the trees The trees start to shake the ground I lose my balance and now I'm left with nothing at all I still remember all the things that were said and done Nothing seems to be able to make it all fade Life seems to be getting harder to live Death creaks the door Life is walking out Tears are falling Fear is rising Crimson on the floor Death shuts the door
i love these 2 parts. good job. watching the clouds come apart... its so... whats the word... never mind i dont remember. poetic? no not really. deep. yeah. thats it. its so deepful and meaningful good work.
only this part make sense to me... i'm not the greatest critic over here but if u could tighten the lyric a bit i think it'll be a hit...
the way i interprate it... is how the person speaking doesnt seem to have a point in living... and how many #### things happened and the person's left with nothing but they cant hold on anymore. thats just me though. its really good.
I can't really explain what this song means. I mean, writing the song was the only way to express the feelings I had. If I could put it in a way that could be broken down to simplier words, I wouldn't be writing poetry or songs. So I can't help anyone to understand the meaning of the song. You would have to be in my exact position in order to and I doubt anyone here has lived my life. Thank you, ass_kicker. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the advice, HARLEYsheXda. But I won't be changing the song. I like it the way it is. But thank you anyways.
maybe with some fine tunes would put the song to justice... anyway, u should like what u wrote... and i'm glad u like it... (usually songwriters would tightened the song before they record it... well, mostly... - amateur critic )
maybe with some fine tunes would put the song to justice... anyway, u should like what u wrote... and i'm glad u like it... (usually songwriters would tightened the song before they record it... well, mostly... - amateur critic ) [/b][/quote] I'm not a artist, though. So, nah nah nah boo boo...