Be My Darkness

The darkness holds me tightly
I wish you were the darkness
The prescence of fear lingers
I hope that you are the fear
Raped by something immortal
You're immortal in my mind
Trapped by constant lonliness
I'm not trapped in your embrace

Red tears are given freedom
As I'm trapped inside my thoughts
Thoughts of you, you're unaware
You don't know I think of you
I can't bear to look at you
You cause me to feel sadness
Because we will never be
And thats what kills me inside

Please know I think of you
And that I need to be loved
Without it, my life will end
I'll die thinking you never knew
Please be my darkness and my fear
To hold me and to linger
To breathe my life into death
And then turn these scars to dust

 

That is truley amazing! good work!

sorry to hear about the depression though

 

Thank you so much.

 

No probs

 

Trish, that is amazing.

 

Will,
Thankyou.

Thats really nice!

 

Wow, that was really really good.

I love that whole stanza, its just awesome!

 

Wow! Trish,your poems are always amazing to read!

 

Great poem Trish. Sorry about the depression, I hope the ceral song helps!! You're a really good writer

 

Thanks to you all.


Thats exteremley nice of you all.

 

That part of the poem is my favourite.
That is such an incredible piece of writing.
It's so depressing, but the imagery created is amazing. Thanks for posting that.

 

whisper, that's one of the best poems I've ever read here...

 

Thanks heaps.