The One

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    Jamie

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    I've walked these lines a thousand times before/
    I seem to be going over them once more/
    She's the only one, who knows, how to treat me right/
    She's the only one, who knows, how to make me laugh inside/
    The days seem to pass, like a pheonix on fire/
    She brings me true desire, and makes me feel fine again/

    All the tears I used to cry/
    Seem to dissapear now, I know/
    That your the only one for me/
    She's the only one who knows/
    What to do to make me feel alright/

    Like a pheonix rising from a flame/
    Your gentle touch, doesn't make me feel the same/
    She's the only one, who knows, how to treat me right/
    She's the only one, who knows, how to make me laugh inside/
    Your the only one I know, who can make me tingle/

    All the tears I used to cry/
    Seem to dissapear now, I know/
    That your the only one for me/
    She's the only one who knows/
    What to do to make me feel alright/

    She's the only one
    She's the only one
    She's the only one

    Who cares.....!

    All the tears I used to cry/
    Seem to dissapear now, I know/
    That your the only one for me/
    She's the only one who knows/
    What to do to make me feel alright/
     
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    Adam

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    I LOVE IT






    :lol:






    I can relate to that :lol: ^_^
     
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    Jamie

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    Cool
     
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    Will

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    Amazing job, mate.
     
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    Anya

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    Wow .Brokenfist I love it!

    That's my favorite line esspecially. Awsome work keep it up. :D
     
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    Alacrity

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    Cool job :)
     
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    LPNeSSRGB

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    Love it! :D Please submit more poems! :)
     
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    Jamie

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    Thanks alot people! Much respect to ya all!

    Anya, it's my favourite line too
     
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    Anya

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    Who wouldn't like that line? ^_^


    Even without that one line, the whole things still awsome.
     
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    Jamie

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    Who wouldn't like that line? ^_^


    Even without that one line, the whole things still awsome. [/b][/quote]
    Thanks alot Anya.
     
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    Ppr:Kut

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    nice work , you r a good writer.. ;)
     
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    Jamie

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    Thanks alot
     

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