This is a poem that I threw together in about 10 minutes. It's really bad. It starts off pretty strong but I feel like I just started rambling about halfway through and then it ended really bad. I'll probably re-write it sometime tomorrow. "Constance (Valentine's Day)" It’s been over a year since the first time I saw you And, ever since that day, you’ve been on my mind You’ve walked through every one of my dreams And you’ve graced every one of my mind’s thoughts You’re the only thing I see when I close my eyes And you’re the only person I want to be with now We may never have shared a single spoken word But we have a special bond that no one can break Our souls are intertwined and they always will be Nothing will ever break the connection between us No matter how far apart the two of us may drift Maybe, someday, I’ll break the silence and speak And, maybe then, we can share our lives together But, until that day, I will just play it all by ear Because, after all this time, I am still in love with you I don’t think that I will ever forget about you And I don’t think that memories of you will ever fade I just wish that I could do something about myself So that I may actually spend my life with you The few pictures I have of you will be kept forever And they’ll never leave the safety of my thoughts I’ll never forget the shine of your emerald green eyes Or the sound of your voice when you laugh I can never forget anything that you’ve done Even if I haven’t been the one you’ve done it with You say that you can’t give them what they want But that just means that they don’t deserve you And they don’t deserve what you have to offer You don’t have to change for anyone at all And you certainly don’t have to change for me Being yourself is all that I can ever ask for today But it won’t matter if the barrier remains between us Although you know I love you, I’m afraid of how you feel Because I’m not sure if you think I still love you And I just wish that I could tell you that I still care You blush with an unmatched intensity Whenever someone says my name around you And you hush up and turn away whenever I’m near I can’t say I don’t do the same when that happens to me Because I would never want to lie to you You’re a question with so many answers The answers are waiting to be given to me But they’ll never fall upon my ears if I never ask I can’t blame the way I am on anyone, not even myself It’s something I have to live with every day I know what I have to do to be with you But it’s too hard for me when I don’t know the approach It’s funny, because you told me I should be myself And to not worry what other people thought of me I wish I could just let go and relax myself I’ve got no pride to lose, no dignity to withhold Yet I still can’t seem to break the shell around me And just talk to you with my own voice I just wish you could look into my eyes and see my love Because it’s all that I can ever give to you Two red roses aren’t enough to show my love And I wish that I could show you with a kiss Valentine’s Day is fast approaching soon We’ll both be alone on the day of love And it’s my fault for not talking to you If I’d just spoken to you one year ago Instead of keeping my feelings locked up inside We could be together in one week But it seems as though that won’t be happening Maybe next year we’ll be together on Valentine’s Day I don’t know, but the one thing I do know Is that I’m still in love with you, Constance
That was beautiful, awesome, sweet and any other adjectives that you can come up with. Great job, Will.
That's reeeally long but I still like the last one your wrote. :chemist: no this one's awsome, don't put yourself down about it.