Senseless Wish

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    ForeverDelayed

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    I wrote this one a couple of days ago, and I think Ill try to make a song out of it, sometime..

    And, btw, Im new here so.. Hey everyone! :D
    Here it comes..


    Senseless wish

    Admire my self-contempt
    Or hate me with eyes shut
    You look through me, blinded
    Strangle me with my own words
    You can’t reach me
    You’re holding yourself back

    Throwing away emotions
    You think you’re a genius
    But there’s a lot you don’t know
    Your geometry is hard to understand
    Even for you
    There’s a lot more you could do

    Wish the signs could reach your eyes
    Without hurting you
    Wish my heart could stop beating
    And my soul rise above
    Without hurting you
    And all the lies my eyes are telling you
    Would change into true words
    Without hurting you

    Thoughts of intimacy are senseless
    Since all you do is touching my outside
    Imagine yourself in the background
    You’d probably scream yourself deaf
    [ Then you’d know how I feel ]
    But you can’t reach me
    You’re holding yourself back

    Wish the signs could reach your eyes
    Without hurting you
    Wish my heart could stop beating
    And my soul rise above
    Without hurting you
    And all the lies my eyes are telling you
    Would change into true words
    Without hurting you

    Wishful thinking
    My daily dream
    Is for you to see the signs
    look into my eyes
    And see Me
     
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    Jamie

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    Thats pretty damn good

    And welcome to the LPA!!!
     
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    LPNeSSRGB

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    Great job! And welcome! :D
     
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    ForeverDelayed

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    Thanks to both of you! :p
    1) for the comments about my poem
    and 2) for making me feel welcome! :D
     

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