"My Obsession" Written by Shane Spitler on 1/09/03 --------------------------------------------- Your my everything - My goddess In my eyes you are faultless Your my temple - I worship In my mind you are perfect I know you abuse your powers - you hold the reigns And with each pull I suffer more pain Your the image I've always loved But your picture is beginning to burn up As the months went by, And the days turned to night, Your kindness began to change, As my love for you, Pulled away from your reigns And now I see - your cruelty And everything you ever thought of me Now you see - my love for you Was never fake - but has gone down with you
The diction in this particular part of the verse is really good. Great job [/b][/quote] thank you. erm..diction?