Listen here https://soundcloud.com/nicktrouble/shine-on It would mean the world to me if you gave me feedback on this, or just a full play. I worked hard on it. Still gonna work on the levels and mastering. As a treat you guys get the lyrics that weren't posted on SC. It's day time and i'm watching the sun shining Time to define what's the divine is designing With clever rhyming / got it down to a science The new Einstein to refine guidelines with Not another mime Nine To Five-ing But a kind young guy trying to stay alive / shit Got the world on my chest / Inclining But i'm fine with it / Pressure no time for it I'll recline a bit / take a breath and realign again Give me a sign / Or better yet give me an outline Praying in the shrine you can see in the skylines Is the bible really what I strive for in a lifetime So as listen to the chimes and watch all of the crime I sip the holy wine and smile everything is alright I'm confident in every one of my accomplishments Conscience got me wondering if there is any stopping it That's nonsense / Keep coming with the constance Hopping obstacles and avoiding the obnoxious You're fucking with the colossus / no novice The new apostle destroying the old prophets Empty pockets but still rocking with the goddess Do this all no profit there is no way you can top it Here's my letter to the heavens / Where's my response? New renaissance hoping to hear from who's beyond us I still don't believe it / It's oh so deceiving But i'mma keep shining and keep on dreaming Rake all the cream in / Picture new scenes from my lucid dreams Shine On
I dig it! Really awesome beat, nice flow. Are you the one rapping? If so, your voice kinda reminds me of a rapper featured on a Gorillaz track (can't remember his name). The production at times kinda gives me that Gorillaz vibe as well for some reason (which is a good thing, btw, big Gorillaz fan here haha). You've got yourself a new follower, man. Great job!