Surrounded

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by erasethepain, Jan 22, 2004.

  1. #1
    erasethepain

    erasethepain Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Jan 26, 2003
    Messages:
    770
    Likes Received:
    0



    My desire cries for aspiration as the fire
    burns from flames of self-indulgence
    Though I have chosen this path alone
    there's no sound of solitude in the midst
    Sickened by my own bliss, the time has come
    tranquility has taken it's last breath
    Weep for one last glimpse, of what's so lost
    put these painful thoughts to rest

    This is all I have ever known,
    everything I've done to you
    It's been carved in stone,
    everything I've put you through

    My ambitions fall through sombered dusk
    from a sky filled with sorrow's dismay
    And somewhere in the distance is a cure
    for everything that's drifting us away
    Ambient are the eyes, why must they hate
    what will remain forever in the heart
    Looked from the inside, only to find what
    has built us will eventually tear us apart

    This is all I have ever known,
    everything I've done to you
    It's been carved in stone,
    everything I've put you through

    I'm so afraid that one day this will go too far
    But I'm the one that's made things the way that they are
    I'm so afraid that one day this will go too far
    But I'm the one making things worse than they really are

    This is all I have ever known,
    everything I've done to you
    It's been carved in stone,
    everything I've put you through

    Surrounded by what has kept me in this place
    The memory could never be more faint
    Just stuck knowing there's nothing I can say
    That'll make you ever want to come back
    Even though your presence hasn't receded
    The feeling couldn't be further from my reach
    Seal my eyes shut so that I will never again be
    Enticed to feel the grade of synthetic excrete
     
  2. #2
    Tony

    Tony war in your bedroom.

    Joined:
    Dec 16, 2003
    Messages:
    1,337
    Likes Received:
    3



    Tightness ^_^
     
  3. #3
    Anya

    Anya Lost LPA Super VIP

    Joined:
    Aug 20, 2003
    Messages:
    8,492
    Likes Received:
    73



    Wow..you have some major talent. :eek:
     
  4. #4
    erasethepain

    erasethepain Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Jan 26, 2003
    Messages:
    770
    Likes Received:
    0



    Thanks. Anyone else?
     
  5. #5
    numbfuse

    numbfuse Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Sep 28, 2003
    Messages:
    137
    Likes Received:
    0



    EXCELLENT. :joe:
     
  6. #6
    erasethepain

    erasethepain Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Jan 26, 2003
    Messages:
    770
    Likes Received:
    0



    Changed it a bit. Added another verse, changed chorus.
     
  7. #7
    Methybrea

    Methybrea Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Feb 8, 2003
    Messages:
    2,483
    Likes Received:
    1



    You still got your insane skills J Money, awesome job!
     
  8. #8
    erasethepain

    erasethepain Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Jan 26, 2003
    Messages:
    770
    Likes Received:
    0



    Thanks man.
     
  9. #9
    Caitlin

    Caitlin Guest




    That's really good, you have an excellent use of word choice. :)
     
  10. #10
    erasethepain

    erasethepain Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Jan 26, 2003
    Messages:
    770
    Likes Received:
    0



    Anyone else??
     
  11. #11
    Anya

    Anya Lost LPA Super VIP

    Joined:
    Aug 20, 2003
    Messages:
    8,492
    Likes Received:
    73



    still..awsome.. :eek:
     

Share This Page