Stained

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    Trish

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    Stained

    She's unconcious and lying on the floor
    Can't think what happened the night before
    A broken bottle in her hand
    Her life, she didn't understand

    She escaped, suicide

    Bloodstained sheets cover her lifeless body
    Bloodstained deaths pouring through her lifeless veins
    All is gone but yet,
    Lonliness remains

    He is broken when he sees her body
    He's been through this unknown death already
    He falls to his knees
    Whispers, 'don't go, please'

    Bloodstained hands hold her near to him
    Bloodstained hate fills his pulsing veins
    All is gone but yet
    Her cold blood remains
     
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    Steph

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    I like this!! Personal experience?
     
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    tkd_rap

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    i like it, very nice B) ;)
     
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    Trish

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    Thankyou and to Steph, no... (see FFF for full explanation!)
     
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    linktolinkinpark

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    What's FFF? I really like the poem! :p It's sad but very true, alot like if LP decided to make a song about suicide. :mellow: But to be honest, it is really a peice of genuine artwork. :mike:
     
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    Numb Girl

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    Wow.I like it!Recently I had a very similar poem in my mind...That's strange... :mellow:
     
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    saunderitos

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    yo dog,you got talent ,that is awsome :mike:
     

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