Here's some more for all who commented. I appreciate your comments alot! So if you would kindly comment again on what I have recently written I would greatly appreciate it. I wish this state of fear would go away, away from me, half-heartedly I take wonder and happiness into my life, but throw it all away, it's useless to think i'll make it through allright, thoughts of pain and anger, numbing my life, make it all go away with the blade of the knife, make it go away make it go away (I can't take it anymore) make it go away make it go away (I can't take it anymore) you think if your in my mind, you lift my spirits and i'll survive, realize that your the reason, I hate to be alive, I doesn't matter if you even exsist, you exist only in the minds of those who need to resist and.. (repeat chorus) (this is added..) Hiding in the corner. empty and betrayed do as I do, not as I say, Waiting for the rush, that empty's my swollen viens, to take away the pain, as soon I feel sane, (repeat chorus) (umm..still unfishished sorry lol)
:whistle: you should tell us........ WHATS IT ABOUT? We're personal with you...... be personal with us ...... :wth:
It's still very personal to me you don't understand. A writer should never give away their personal meanings behind a song. Most do but I like to keep mine simple, where everyone guesses. And besides, you have no right to ask about my personal life if I don't want to tell you about it. Mine is too personal to speak of.
It's still very personal to me you don't understand. A writer should never give away their personal meanings behind a song. Most do but I like to keep mine simple, where everyone guesses. And besides, you have no right to ask about my personal life if I don't want to tell you about it. Mine is too personal to speak of. how would you know if i dont understand if you didnt even POST what it was about? :wth: .........you think your a writer? lol why are you acting like your life sucks so much worse than everyone eleses? :wth:
Dude, chill man... If she don't wanna tell you what it's about then you can't force her to... So just lay off... Also, good song, keep it up and then when it's finished I'm sure it'll be awesome
Excuse me? I'm not saying my life sucks worse than anyone elses i'm just saying you have no right to push me and make me tell you about my personal life. I am a writer, I write poems. I suggest you not put words in my mouth and tell me to post somthing I don't want to post. My life is my business, not yours. If I don't want to tell you I don't have to. I never said my life was worse than anybodys, my life is my own and you have no right to go against that. That was really rude of you. EXTREMLY rude.
i.. im sorry.. i just.. i dint think youd care.. most people just tell whats its about........ sorry.
It's okay i'm sorry too, just don't try pushing things out of me that's all. I apoligize for yelling at you. It's just I'd rather not explain my life too much, too complicated. Thankyou for commenting though.