Love Fire.

<div align=center>Love Fire.

Once in your eyes,
A love fire now ashes,
Doused by me.</div>

Came up with this one while studying for Math.

I'm not sure about the syllables, I'm bad with them so I tried my best.;

Anyway, sense they are supposed to tell a story, this is about my old,(Hate the word ex.) girlfriend.

Thoughts and reply's?

 

Thats coool man

 

The first and second line have the wrong amount of syllables, its suppose to be 3, 5, 3 i think...

Anyway, great job! its pretty cool how a poem can be so descriptive with only 3 lines! that's why i like haiku.

 

I'm pretty sure it's 5, 7, 5. Thanks for the comments.

 

Excellent one! I heard about that but I can't remember the exact number...