first song i ever recorded awhila backk ..its my own song with my beat and lyrics..Got me rapping and yelling in it lol hope u guys enjoy it http://soundcloud.com/carlos-da-poet/broken-promises comments and feedback will be appreciated..thank you
Not bad. Did you play the guitar? I think it is cool I will have to give a better listen when I am on a computer. Edit: Decided to stop being lazy and turn the computer on. It has and old school LP vibe to it kind of which is cool. I think that scream/yell thing could have been done better or left out? It sounds kind of weird. I love the synth in the beginning I actually think it would sound better if it was a little louder in the mix. Not a huge fan of the guitar. Overall its really cool though. The lyrics sound like some older LP stuff not bad but I feel like they could be better.