erm hey me and broken fist came up with this, pls comment tell us what you think ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ (intro) Where do I begin? What do i see? Through the mist of life Through the screams and through the mind Of thy enemy What do you see? Inside my mind (Chorus) I can see you crying.... Again Nothing will be the same...again I just don’t know who i wanna be Or what I wanna do Why do you say? All those things you don't mean I can’t do this again Another day of lying to you (Chorus) I can see you crying.... Again Nothing will be the same...again I just don’t know who i wanna be Or what I wanna do [echos and fades] What’s left to say? [Change away, disappear with me] I can’t do this again [cos I’m fading away] I need room to breathe [Stand back, I'm about to blow] This all has to change [change change change] Nothing left to say, nothing more to live for Take it away remove it from me [HELP ME] (Chorus) I can see you crying.... Again Nothing will be the same...again I just don’t know who i wanna be Or what I wanna do (Bridge) Take it away cut away Never return with me I don’t know who i wanna be
thats quite ... depressing but i like it. it's a good choice of words and how to put them but most lyrics for a song should rhyme every once in a while. but thats what i say and its what me and my band do mostly. but other then that its really good. maybe you could help us with some songs and we could help you.
it was a kind brain storming session online, and it appeared to work it could do with some tweeking, but we wre impressed with what we got, cheers for the feedback