Vision of a Dying Sun. My creative lyrics.(I try)

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    David Vereker

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    (Verse 1)
    Do you feel the wind blowing across the stars?
    Do you know me or just who you are?
    When my mind opens into a place
    That we've never seen


    We lift into the sky
    What we see is a wonderful sight
    The glow of the sun is burning bright!
    As you leave your thoughts

    (Chorus)
    What you've left will never be found
    What you heard was a beautiful sound
    As you beg for the mercy of the dying sun
    As we travel down the river
    That leads us through the clouds!

    (Verse 2)
    We stop at the grey
    And we see the cracks
    We hear the sounds of a banging drum
    We see the light of a breaking bulb
    We see the rain of a thousand clouds

    We lift into the sky
    What we saw was a wonderful sight
    The glow of the sun is fading away
    As you leave your thoughts

    (Chorus)
    What you've left will never be found
    What you heard was a merciless sound
    As you beg for the mercy of the dying sun
    As we travel down the river
    That leads us through the clouds!

    (Bridge)
    We saw the light as it fades away
    It was once a beautiful day
    We feel the bangs
    We see the flash
    Hear the sounds of the broken glass
    This was it as the river turns
    We feel the glow
    As it lets us burn

    We lift into the sky
    What we saw was a wonderful sight
    The glow of the sun is fading away
    As you leave your thoughts

    We fell down to the ground
    What we heard was a merciless sound
    As the gods put light in our souls
    We start to blackout into these holes

    (Chores)
    What you've left will never be found
    What you heard was a merciless sound
    As you beg for the mercy of the dying sun
    As we travel down the river
    That leads us through the clouds!
    The secrets we never found!
     
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    Calvin

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    I liked how I could imagine LP using these lyrics in songs like Burn It Down or New Divide :p but good job :)

    P.s. its spelt 'Chorus' and a hook is usually the same thing as a chorus but what you wrote as a 'hook' is indeed a 'bridge' :)
     
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    Star Scream

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    love the lyrics... good job
     
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    David Vereker

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    Yeh I'm no expert on that :p
     

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