Deserted (Only V1 + Chorus)

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    Calvin

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    Constructive criticism is appreciated :)

    [Verse]
    Far beyond the distant moon
    Lies a carcus inside a tomb
    The sarcophagus lies in stone walls
    Lies on his lips like cold sours
    Mummies call from within their inner chambers
    Like a cell block packed fulla imminent dangers
    Criminal strangers sit behind the curtain exploitin' 'em
    With words that would sting like a turban fulla scorpions
    And a flute in the distance plays a tune that they all dance to
    They never have a chance to/Freeze frame like livin' statues
    And once its gone no face will seem to be seen thereafter
    As baffled minds seek the guidance of Cleopatra
    But as the sandstorm/Casted a man was born
    Clashin' with the land he'd torn/As he lashed with a hand so warm
    That the gods of the sun failed to stop him
    Mocks were set upon him
    Blocks of heavy bolts had locked him
    And a problem laid far beyond him
    The tongues of the innocent
    Slowly started diminishin'
    And just as he stayed oblivious
    He triggered his dizziness of the pitiless

    [Hook]
    As/The sands of the desert got carried by the wind
    And all our sins faded within the body saved to win
    He/Left with a smile/Arms raised to the Gods
    All the while/Lands seemed to be lifted of the fog
    Eyes were opened/Visions cleared/Ears listened
    And the broken fear was not of their own existence
    Departin' of their own accord/Not bein' forced to munity
    All stories happen behind the door of the tomb to tree
     
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    David Vereker

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    OOoh sounds like a new Skyrim DLC :D
     
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    Calvin

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    That was completely the angle I was going for. ;)
     
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    David Vereker

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    haha :)
     

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