some thing i made while i was bored please be a critic The unforgivable consequence Verse 1 I see fantasies beyond what my mind can bear. This weakening of the mind as it drowns in smoke and fire I feel as if something is pulling me apart Like the torture chambers of the prisons of old As I endure every second of the pain, time passes by And all of what is lost can never again be gained. Chorus This is something that my mind has never faced but here it is beheld in my fortune In my blood runs the fuel of the ship In my bones there is the gain of my frustration And all I got was the unforgivable consequence Verse 2 This continues until I lose myself in memories of the unseen. I always ask where my heart has been during the destruction of the mind, But now I know that this occurred because of the memory. The reminder was my downfall And therefore it drowned in the smoke and fire. Bridge And now I will face this all No matter what consequence they give me I will fight to the end Whatever my mind can bear, Whatever drowns in smoke and fire. Whatever second of pain I endure. I will be willing to take forth the unforgivable consequence Outro This is something that my mind has never faced but here it is beheld in my fortune In my blood runs the fuel of the ship In my bones there is the gain of my frustration And all I got all I ever got was the unforgivable consequence.
"Like the torture chambers of the prisons of old" This would be good, if it were tweaked a little. The rest is just sophisticated Meteora lyrics. I don't like it.