Sad Poems

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    Matt

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    Asking Why:
    Why don't you care?
    I stand in front of you
    You only stare
    As I wonder what path to choose

    I cannot feel you there like I used to
    You've fallen away from me
    I only wonder what you want me to do
    It's so hard for me to see

    I know what I should do
    But can't bear to even think it
    I can't even look at you
    Without losing my mind over it

    I can tell you think this, too
    Though I don't want to say
    You stare at me and I stare at you
    Waiting for that fateful day

    In my mind I'm breaking down
    As I stand here asking why
    You stand there and comfort me
    As I cry, cry, cry...

    Part 2 Coming Soon

    Please give me honest reviews of this. ^_^
     
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    corrupted_authority

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    its not sad sorry and its boring .... its more like a song ! sorry for any offence dude !
     
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    Michael

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    it is sort of sad although it is a bit boring like the other one said. Put some more intresting words in. Mine are also on here and if u want to take a look then please do I am after some reviews to mine aswell. :D
     

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