Strings of Lyre, Wings of Mercury

Strings of Lyre, Wings of Mercury

From atop a hill, an expansive view
Where lights below flicker in the drifting dew
They dance themselves into the night sky
To conceal all above, where no poisons lay
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Any critiques?

 

I can tell you what people always tell me...."it's to short"...lol J/K really good!

 

Good stuff. Continue writing