.eulogy for an angel;

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    Will

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    Eulogy for an Angel

    i had finally returned after a week of abscence
    only to find out that you weren't there
    when i learned what had happened to you, my love
    i hated the thought of your name in past-tense
    because i'd never told you that i cared
    i couldn't stand the thought of you hovering above
    so i slowly laid my saddened mind upon the table

    your life almost changed as the ice took control
    and as your life flashed before your eyes
    i can only imagine those thoughts playing in your mind
    but you've got to know that i was with your soul
    i'm what prevented your trip into the skies
    by your side is where i want to be to help you shine
    and we can live our lives like we're inside a fable

    i'd rather not think about what could've happened
    i'd rather look forward to what you'll do
    and i hope that i can end up by your side for all eternity
    i hope that maybe one day i can come back again
    and prove to you that my heart is true
    now that i know that you are safe, i can prove with purity
    that i hope i never have to give your eulogy, my angel
     
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    *gasps* :eek:

    This piece of writing flowed together perfectly. Great usage of words. It's sad in the beginning but sweet in the end. I love it. I also love the title. Excellent work, Will. ^_^ :)
     
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    Thanks. It means a lot to me, considering that what I wrote about happened recently. :)
     
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    Sounds great. A lot of vivid imagery. I just wanna hear more its too short! :p
     
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    I could make it into a song, but, for now, I'll leave it as a poem.

    Thanks for the comment. :)
     
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    Methybrea

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    I could make it into a song, but, for now, I'll leave it as a poem.

    Thanks for the comment. :) [/b][/quote]
    Okay, I see what you mean. I was just joking anyways. Leaving this short probably will make it more powerful because I get the feeling that its meant to be a quick message. Besides, it ends great!
     
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    COooooooooooooooooool Will! love it, What does Eulogy mean for us thick people? not namin names *cough*Dedicated*cough*
     
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    Thanks for the comment.

    And a eulogy is a brief speech you give at someone's funeral.
     
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    Thanks for the comment.

    And a eulogy is a brief speech you give at someone's funeral. [/b][/quote]
    Ahh right, cool man, real cool...Sorry to dedicated for having that lil dig at him in there ^_^
     
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    Mmm...
     

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