Hands Inside The Thin Glass

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    MJM1190

    MJM1190 New Member

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    Hello everybody. I am new to this forum and just wanted to post some lyrics I wrote. I'm a big fan of Linkin Park but these lyrics unfortunatly weren't inspired by them. Critique away!

    © Michael Mancusco, 2003

    The hands inside the thin glass tick
    Remind me that they tell the time
    My eyes, they sleep and fall and dream
    But my body stays awake all night

    It seems the dark controls my thoughts
    Cause that is where my dream takes place
    In city parks or streets or roads
    Are places where I see it's face

    I see the swings, they're from the park
    The one's we swung on after dark
    And the long, sleek shadows, they were there
    And they followed, traced us, everywhere
    They filled us in
    With dark colors
    With dark colors
    Dark colors

    I sit there awake, eyes are closed
    The bars seem to rot, though they're new
    The water from the curved pipe drips
    But all I see and hear is you

    And even with the lightest touch
    I won't react in sympathy
    My dreams seem sharp and deadly, too
    And in silence they are killing you

    I see the swings, they're from the park
    The one's we swung on after dark
    And the long, sleek shadows they were there
    And they followed, traced us, everywhere
    They filled us in
    With dark colors
    With dark colors
    Dark colors

    They traced us everywhere
    Everywhere
    They traced us everywhere
    Everywhere
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    Thanks for reading. :)
     
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    RiverJudeAlexander

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    i wonder if you came up with that whilst swinging on a park swing... hmm... as for me, i can picture a cold, autumn night... leaves... a soft sprinkle of rain... hmm... I LIKE IT! it's very nice... michael mancusco... SWING SWING SWING... YEAH!! oh and... WELCOME... that's a strange word... W E L C O M E... hmm... SO YEAH!! :D
     
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    Adam

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    Really good
    better than any of my stuff
    u should write more
     
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    Pa-troll

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    that's true
     

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