Felo-De-Se

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    John.

    John. i am corruption LPA Super Member

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    I wrote this song not upon my emotions for once. I think it's a pretty simple song and I wrote it in a few minutes.
    Thanks for all feedback!

    Felo-De-Se - meaning: 'Suicide'
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    (Verse)
    She's not there to take my hand/
    So far away, I'll try to be a man/
    Gimme a reason not to say goodbye/
    This time is wasted, I wanna die/
    The tears I tasted from my eyes/
    I'll admit I'll miss you the most/
    So here's to you, my last toast/

    (Chorus)
    This is far from alright/
    Blood stains the walls/
    If I leave here tonight/
    Will anyone care at all/

    (Verse 2)
    I don't have many friends/
    But I live as best as I can/
    My dreamt life was shaken/
    And my loved one was taken/
    For once, I'm not mistaken/
    I've lost every reason for trust/
    If living is hell, then dying is a must/

    (Chorus)
    This is far from alright/
    Blood stains the walls/
    If I leave here tonight/
    Will anyone care at all/

    (Bridge)
    Take my soul,
    Because I'm quickly slipping away/
    Sh*t gets old,
    The rising sun pains me everyday/
     
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    Jamie

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    Once again man, great work. Very emotional.
     
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    John.

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    Yeah, thanks..I was thinkin' bout adding a Pre-Chorus to it..but I don't know.
     
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    Pa-troll

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    it's really good
     

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