4 Original songs, No genre

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    ThaHandyman

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    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NQYj5E2Ki_U :10 Chapters (alternative hip-hop/acoustic)

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ZQsr_TuLlQ :Hands Up (hip-hop/club)

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ohVJVVAGnjs :New Horizon Complex (Pop? Alternative)

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QD4ZxJhqR6E : Killer Free (rap)


    These are 4 original songs I produced, and sang on the first 3. I'd really like some feedback, because I think they're pretty decent songs (save for the 3rd its a 3 bar song but I'm re-mixing it). I have no formal musical training at all, everything I learned was on the internet, save for a little guitar my cousin helped me with.

    The first is my most recent and I think the best, and I have an all acoustic/pop song I wrote and recorded but I'm kinda scared to put it up. I just have a general disregard for genre and just record what sounds best. Everything was done through Fruity Loops and I have a Taylor 214 Acoustic. Thanx for any feedback!
     
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    Sounds like the situation I'm in. Never learned any music in my life until I got FL Studio and tried to teach myself. I still can't play any real instruments, but I can on my computer! Lol.

    I like the third one the best. It's got some cool stuff going on. I just don't like hip hop or rapping that much. You sound the best in the first one, though. Keep it up.
     
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    Well thanks for the feedback, yeah I'm gonna re-record the third one, cuz I love it, but it needs to be 4 bars, it was impossible to rap to so I just sang, gonna put some electric guitar and dubsteppy bass behind it.

    FL can teach you a lot, just with integrating different instruments with the right notes.
     
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    Well thanks for the feedback, yeah I'm gonna re-record the third one, cuz I love it, but it needs to be 4 bars, it was impossible to rap to so I just sang, gonna put some electric guitar and dubsteppy bass behind it.

    FL can teach you a lot, just with integrating different instruments with the right notes.
     
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    The third one sounds really nice. But I'm also more of a fan of light, mellow music with a good melody so I'm a little biased lol.
     
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    well thankyou, as I mentioned earlier I'm trying to kind of remix it for an "All of the Lights" (Kanye) like vibe with lots of different elements.
     
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    1. I love how you sampled that song. Nice easy rapping.
    2. I'm not a huge fan of this.
    3. I like it. i like the lofiness in it.
    4. I love the beat.

    Number one is amazing btw. The rest are great too.
     

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