Yo ! first of all, i'm french so if my english is not so good, please forgive me!! and by the way, this forum is geat !!! To my mom i've suffered enough of this injury the pain is hurting me deep inside the tears are ready to fall every night i don't know how to explain it it's like my heart stop beating like i'm slowly faling your feel your family's sorrow that's when the tears start falling... i've tried to withdraw my feelings i've tried to withdraw my tears every of your smile starts giving me life back every of your cry starts calling my pain back i didn't succeed enough, oh for sho' that's when i had to let it go Chorus i don't know how i got this way but i know i got something to say sometimes i feel like i hurt you every time i feel like i love you but i still don't know what to do !!!??? My happiness is like the sea without water the baby without the mother i could have retired the sun from the earth to have that feeling back in my heart but i didn't we don't always have what we want whe shouldn't wish what we miss cause life was created like this Even with these thoughts, i still want back my happiness i still miss my childhood, my "PAMPERS" and my little ass Chorus i don't know how i got this way but i know i got something to say sometimes i feel like i hurt you every time i feel like i love you but i still don't know what to do !!!??? i don't know how i got this way but i know i got something to say sometimes i feel like i hurt you every time i feel like i love you the difference now is i know what to do Love you and simply show it to you !! i don't wanna feel the weight of your tears falling on me i don't wanna hear the sound of your voice crying i just wanna see u breathing... i just wanna see u smiling... Mom, I love U...
First of all : Welcome to the forum!!! This Poem/Song is really great!I like the way you described the feelings in it. I think it's very good.