Music "The Last Breath" (Original Song)

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by francolozano, Apr 10, 2016.

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    francolozano

    francolozano Well-Known Member

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    francolozano, Apr 10, 2016



    Hi, guys!
    I just wanted to share with you my latest song release on my YouTube channel for my upcoming album soon to be released, let me know what you think about the music and lyrics.
    Bye!

    [video=youtube;Njw0vj0_SBo]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Njw0vj0_SBo[/video]
     
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    minuteforce

    minuteforce Danny's not here, Mrs. Torrance. LPA Team

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    minuteforce, Apr 14, 2016



    I like all the visual stuff, for what it's worth. Your idea for the lyric video is one that I like, and it fits the song tonally, in my opinion. Bonus points if the footage is yours and/or you did the edits, 'cause it looks nice.

    As for the track, I gave it a quick listen and it sounds fine. The vocals maybe sound a bit too dry but that's really down to personal taste.
     

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