My Fallen Angel Crystallised Mesmerized As I look deep into you eyes So pure The lure Could you be my only cure? My fallen Angel In your cradle Catch me if you are able So deep is your wound My only saviour How dark is your mood Save me please From this disgrace It’s only you That knows my true face ok, now with one i was just experimenting alittle with different styles again. let me know if it's bad, good or whatever... i need for this writers block to lift! ahhh!
Hey, good job! It's good to experiment with different styles, it helps find which is best for you. I like this a lot, the best I've read from you for a while.
thank you fallintosleep! this was one that just came to me relatively pure. i didn't change much of it at all...