Untitled poem

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    Glenn

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    And all this time, I assumed self-doubt
    And all this time, I never knew what it was about
    And all these times, I felt like everyone was against me
    Until recently, I never knew who I’d be
    So start right now, get off your ass
    Before you know it, your whole life will pass
    And all this time, I never made a move
    The only time I rose, was to prove
    That I could succeed in my life
    And that I could overcome the strife
    I was never strong enough
    My brain was always in cuffs
    I searched my whole life and finally found the key
    Then the dreams were clear and I could finally see
    Now I can walk with my head held high
    I can pursue the dreams and perfect myself until I die
     
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    ch|e|s|t|er

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    eh-pretty good! 7/10 :)
     
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    ass_kicker

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    its great ^_^
     
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    Glenn

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    Thanks! :) Any more comments? :D
     

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