The one

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    Adam

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    The one (My last love song)

    Did you ever wonder why I slept so long
    I wanted to dream of you for eternaty
    Then you woke me...
    My eyes got lost in your beauty
    Stuttering for things to say to you
    But actions are louder than words

    this is my last love song
    So I gotta make this clear
    I loved you and you never knew
    I always told you I needed something
    All I wanted was you

    I'm gonna hold you close
    Once I grasp, I'm never gonna let go
    I'm never gonna let you fall
    I never wanna lose it all
    'Cause you're the one...

    The one who can sing me to sleep
    The one who makes my heart beat
    The one with lips so sweet
    The one I hope to keep forever
     
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    Dark Knight

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    i like it, for some reason i feel i can connect with it ^_^

    "this is my last love song
    So I gotta make this clear
    I loved you and you never knew
    I always told you I needed something
    All I wanted was you"
    :whistle:

    this is my favorite part of the piece, i can definatly feel what you're saying with this, it is great keep up you're writing. :mike:
     
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    Adam

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    Thanks for the comment :)
     
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    Nice one. Loving someone and they never knew, something alot of people could connect to.
     
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    Adam

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    Thanx for the comment LigerZeroShneider
     

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