im not sure how good this one is, but i havent posted anything in a while anyway Taken There is nothing good about it When all your sight becomes unclear I stumble in my feelings And I always turn to fear I reject the thought you have All the selfishness in this I want to turn my back Learning that you cannot be trusted You take advantage of me You take the things you need Hoping that I’ll be here waiting for you Forever and a day This shell is not a man I am not a machine I want someone who wont look away And continue F##king me (over) This sounds unforgiving I don’t think you should leave today Just know that every time I reach my hand out Another piece is taken from me Once I knew this world I thought that I had friends Now I just don’t care All my friends are long since dead You take advantage of me You take all the things you need Hoping that I will be here waiting for you Forever and a day This shell is not a man I am not a machine I want a friend who wont look away now And continue F##king me over But I didn’t hurt you i stuck myself within this world These thoughts in my head they dont matter I say it all the time And I B*tch and I whine But when I stop to say all this I realize that I’m still living it You take advantage of me You take all the things you need Hoping that I will be here waiting for you Forever and a day I know that you aren’t a friend Your still nothing to me I cant be your friend when you look away Forgetting everything about me
Hm... I like this one but I think you should be more specific. It's a bit vague. Other than that, though, it's good!
Wow i really liked that.. keep writing!!! i did a song called taken once on the LPMB... it sucked lol...