Rainy Days The light in my room is always on I’m scared of darkness Each night living on my own Is getting harder [harder] This fight, never ending lack Of liveliness gets stronger The rain’s filling up my lungs Guess it’s my last October TV’s screaming loud I barely manage not to break it That look in your eyes You look at me like I am naked The wind breaks the trees An ugly storm is moments away I grab my pillow tightly Gonna oversleep this decade If it is all about the feelings that I feel then I’m out If it is all about the sacrifice then I’m not missing out I need to have some time to figure out, to figure out this life I need to live for something or I will die for nothing Outside in the hallway Children played and broke a window I stare through the silhouette Of person in my mirror I cry for the yesteryear My life is one bad habit When I was a kid I had no friends to play around with You talk and talk But I am deaf to hear and blind to see you You say you love me But I find it hard just to believe you I lock the door and hope That rain will stop and make it better My only fear is fear of Lonely day with stormy weather I laugh without a sound In corners of my mind How funny, how ironic I saw myself this time Without my soul and heart And with my fingers on my veins Can’t feel the pulse Can’t feel the pulse I feel depressed on rainy days
I'm sorry to say that although this is an awsme poem there was something about it that i didn't like as much as the other poems. It's still really good but something about the way it is written. So it is more of a personal thing. I'm sure someone will come soon and say it is the best thing they've ever read
you're right! and that's exactly what i wanted to do with this song. to make it differnent and unique. when i wrote it last autumn i felt it was the best thing i have ever written. and when i came up with the melody too i was blown away. i couldn't believe that i actually wrote it. thanks anyway. i always appreciate your comments
this just blows me away!!! i love the imagery you have used in this one! fantastic work! i feel like this on rainy days too. keep up the good work! love it!