hey, my names matt, and i'm new to this, and i wanted to test our some of my poems..tell me honestly... the sun shining in this world, but all i see; a grey sky by me you walk but you don't glance my way i feel my heart shatter like glass here i sit not so far away over i glance, troubled you look how you feel i dont know i hear your voice echo in my head i try to shut it out, before it shuts me down i scream in pain, forcing me down it's a start...tell me what you think
i think it's very good. i can actually relate to every single line. keep it up! :chaz: "we're a bunch of thespians"-mike shinoda