My Insanity

Walking this path alone,
I know it to well.

To die for a living,
Or to sit and dwell.

In my heart its just fine,
But in the inside of me, it dies.

Hoping and trying to the reality,
Of shining white lies.

Moments gone and far away,
From the truth is dying.

Liberate this will,
To release it, it's lying.

To hear me scream my way back,
To the broken surface and light.

Its shatterig myself inside,
Its shattering the silent night.

Maybe you shouldn't leave me here,
To ease the pain.

To cut away from reality,
For hope to live in vain.

My insanity is so sweet, but noisy,
So destructive and holds with force.

I hope to live another breath sinking day,
To hold onto my own remorse.

 

I told you. You are becoming better with every poem you release. Keep it up, this really means much to see someone improve themselves in something they are already great at. B)

 

Very weird, you commented in my topic at the same hour and minute I commented in your topic.

 

indeed, i am thank you..
yeah its weird when u think about it..

 

Even though its different it reminds me of my set of lyrics also called My Insanity. This is quite good, keep up

 

like always, it's awsome, you've got your own unique style which i like. Another great piece of writing.

 

nice...keep it up

 

This thing is insane.

 

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it's a good job!