My Demise

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    Methybrea

    Methybrea Well-Known Member

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    VERSE:
    Photographs line the shelves around me
    Memories of how I used to be surround me
    The joyous occasions of yesterday turn grey
    Each moment being wasted, I'm in disarray

    Paying for my lack motivation
    Always taking the easy way
    Ending up with complications
    These things haunt me everyday
    Can't get out of this labyrinth
    So how can you save me from my demise?

    CHORUS:
    Sitting here isolated, no real friends
    Always wanting what I have
    I can't wait for my life to end
    Past waiting for my present to crash

    To a million shards of glass....

    VERSE:
    Can only see in black and white
    The colour scheme reflects my mood
    Just watch and wait: hold tight
    I'm going to fall apart really soon

    When I break into shards in pain
    You'll see my life: played over again
    Raining outside, fits the occasion
    And you my friend, a willing liason

    CHORUS

    BRIDGE:
    Ready to do the deed
    Do I have all I need?
    Must fall to make things right
    Gonna leave this world in fright

    Please come and see me soon
    Now you see all that I knew
    Time fades like residue
    The minutes are gone
    And the seconds are few....

    CHORUS

    OUTRO:
    Come and see me soon
    Blood flowing on my hands now
    The sweet stench fills your senses
    Finally death is in its commencement...
     
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    LornVourkolakas

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    Whoa dude, cool lyrics. I ended up singing it. Probably not the way you have it in your mind, but I think the lyrics are awesome.
     
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    Pa-troll

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    Hey!!!!! I shouldn'y read and shoudn't write this, and YOU shouldn't read this too, but I know you will, so: reading this words makes me sad because I know, I'll never write something as good as your lirics
     
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    Jamie

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    great lyrics there
     
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    Methybrea

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    Lorn- Thanks! I read it over and started singing it too :teehee:

    Pa-troll - Aww, you shouldn't say that. I just had a good idea and have a good vocabulary, just start writing and gain experience, and you can write lyrics like this I bet! Thanks for the compliment though :) So don't be sad, if you want to write good lyrics: practise!

    Brokenfist - You comment on my stuff a lot thanks again!
     
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    Andrea

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    Holy crap! That was excellent. I really loved the verses. Excellent job! :)
     
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    Anthony.

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    Excellent work! You're really good at writing, keep going :D .
     
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    Methybrea

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    :eek: Wow! Lots of feedback!

    Thanks! :D
     

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