Invisible

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    Nick

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    I DID NOT WRITE THIS, but my friend did and we ended up turning it into a song and changing it up somewhat for lyrical sake. (But not much)

    Here is the original, I love it

    The night brings a few hours until morning.
    Breath.
    Look up, remind yourself where the people you love are.
    I feel invisible.
    Am I invisible?
    And the summer air was sweet.
    Let the grass twist around your feet.
    Breath.
    Am I invisible?
    I feel invisible.

    I have lost my body.
    It's somewhere in the air.
    And I can only live vicariously because you won't see me.
    You won't see me.

    The night brings deep thoughts and shallow conversations.
    Breath.
    The sky is still black.
    Remind yourself where they are.
    Do you feel invisible?
    Are we invisible?
    Let the sun warm life to your fingers.
    Breath.
    Are we invisible?
    Do you feel invisible?

    I have lost my body.
    It's somewhere in the air.
    And I can only live vicariously because you won't see me.
    You won't see me.

    We question our motives.
    We sulk in our vainty.
    And say this was "never for you".
    Only for me.
    (And if I'm not invisible, I'm damn well near it.)
     
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    Good work to your friend and you! I really like this Nick. I hope to be hearing this someday :)
     
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    Nick

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    www.myspace.com/iamanenemymusic

    It's on the player. "Invisible"
     

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