Intermission Set against but don’t know why No questions because we’re shy But it’s always poor who die While riches pre-tend to cry Covering up with the vague detail Nerve gas causing rapid exhale [Line needs changing] And the stress making you go pale While you pretend to weep Blaming others for your mistakes You’re FAKE! Cause death and suffering but don’t care Killing you is fair Get out of our lives we need you not You just got my mother shot! [Said like an angry guy ^^] The minority have no clue Why you tell us what to do The ones who stand, are the few Who want them out of power, and you Can you hear the intermission? Can you hear the intermission? Can you hear the intermission? Can you hear the inter intermission of life
Pretty good. I can hear it as a song... And for the line needs changing bit... Here's some possibilities. Air so thick you can't exhale. Inhale would work just as good there. Air around you going stale. What makes you think the strong prevail People lamenting gruesome tales. Any of them.. Or if you want to ignore this go ahead, lol. It's good as it is.