Inside

well, i'd like to hear what people think, so here goes nothin

Pain inside knows no boundary
Happiness outside, gotta let em see
Concealed emotions kept inside my body
Restrained life, for I’ll never be…(life, life, life)

never gonna be ok (x3)

Back Away
My Life I will pay
####ed up inside
TAKE MY LIFE (x2)

Trembling in fear destroying my mind
The hatred inside I'm trying to find
Leave it inside, afraid to face it (leave, leave, leave)
The hatred comes out, I can taste it!

Never gonna be ok…(x3)

Back Away
My life I will pay
####ed up inside
TAKE MY LIFE (x3)

I cant see what I'm meant to be
Meant to live…in a lost reality
Just back away (back away, back away)
BACK
OFF
JUST STEP THE #### OFF
BACK
OFF
JUST STEP THE #### OFF
BACK! OFF!
BACK! OFF!
GET THE #### AWAY!

Back Away
My life I will pay
####ed up inside
TAKE MY LIFE (x2)

GET
THE
####
AWAY!!!!

I was a little mad

 

a little mad? Oh geez...walking away noow...

lol jk

But cool poem, most definently.

Harsh. Kinda scary... :chemist:

 

lol thanks, didnt mean to scare ya lol

 

no no no you didn't scare me I was just joking

 

yeah i figured, just thought i'd go along with it lol

 

any other comments? please!?

 

Lol same. I was like woah.... :

 

Great Job

 

I like that alot..its like... and

 

yay, thanks!

 

great!! i got a mate that writes in the same kinda way as u!