Inside myself I sleep alone, All alone, wanting for my home. To cut me, to hurt me, Make me look so blue. Inside myself, I cry so hard, Waiting for this rage to end. (i know its crap but its good)
This is pretty good, short and sweet. I believe if you keep writing and postin you could become great and then one day, mabye one day, be almsot as good as me Great work. Hope to hear more and watch you develop. Keep it up.
then lets see it then! i think there is something there that shows you can be a good writer! looking out for more