I'm Gone I know you know I know I don't make any sense Every suggestion an thought out of oblivion The dust it lies and piles up in time I flame the torch just for laughs Inside I know I'll be locked and taken away at last. You know I know you know that you're worried sick You Have a child that's 21 but acts that age reversed Say hello to my corspe when you see me in the hearse My mind is gone and I knew all along that it was never very strong Oh, I'm gone, I'm gone, I'm gone, I'm gone Oh ahhh I'm gone, I'm gone, I'm gone How long? A purple daze, the color fades. I'm in a abyss of a maze I set the house ablaze even though I know I shouldn't have The ashes lie on top and pile up and up and stop Inside I know That someday I'll be carried away You have a son that's grown but still a child in ways You know I know you know that your worried sick I know you know I know I don't make any sense Oh I'm gone, how long, how long, How long Oh ahh I'm gone, how long, how long, I'm gone Oh, I'm gone, I'm gone, I'm gone, I'm gone Rainbow haze of imagdry I know my fate is on my knees Oh, I'm gone, I'm gone, I'm gone, I'm gone
Hey, that was pretty good! Hehe just so you know, at the end it says, "Rainbow haze of imagdry" but it should be "imagery" Just so ya know. But otherwise, it was good, nice job.
i's very sad...and..like the poem of a mistaken man, who doesn't want to undo the mistakes because he isn't strong enough to.