I Remember

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    Glenn

    Glenn Super Member LPA Super Member

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    I Remember

    I remember the horrid event
    As a vague faded dream
    The cuts of pain for every year of torment
    Makes it more real than it would seem
    Hearing the police sirens wail
    Occasionally my whimpering cry
    Screaming at the suspect going to jail
    Praying he would die

    Anger rises out of my small mind
    Always will remember that evil face
    Images from that day arise to remind
    me of the memory I just want to erase
    In these years after I try to stay calm
    And move on to the rest of my life
    But I still hurt from scars on my palm
    And still remember that man with his knife.

    Comments? :)
     
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    Leslie

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    Great job! I really like it. :)
     
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    Casual D

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    Pretty deep, I like it. 10/10
     
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    Omar A

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    Awesome
     
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    Glenn

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    Thanks for the opinions! :) Any more? :p
     
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    Leones

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    I really like it.. ^_^
     

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