I do

I am here today,
With everything to say.

Drop away my heart,
Let us not be apart.

For my love,
My peaceful dove.

Are you only here,
Releasing me of fear.

For theres always you,
So I do.

Love you again to time,
Without spending a dime.

Your my angel in me,
But your mine to be.

 

Pretty good! :chemist:

 

thankies

 

:chemist: awesome

apart from one bit,and i guess we've all done it

here-fear,a bit overused. try something new and exciting for it

awesome though

 

THANKS !!

 

i cant seem to find my own self
its like im searching and searching through shelfs
its like im a new person inside my health
i dont feel the same but i feel less different
but even though though the harder i try its meaning less
the lines and bars may not be the same
but its how u show and live through the game
well atleast it wont hurt me if i try
but it will all go wrong if u lie

 

i cant seem to find my own self
its like im searching and searching through shelfs
its like im a new person inside my health
i dont feel the same but i feel less different
but even though the harder i try its meaning less
the lines and bars may not be the same
but its how u show and live through the game
well atleast it wont hurt me if i try
but it will all go wrong if u lie

 

*looks up* Why'd he write that? Never mind... The poem was pretty cool... Haven't seen a poem with verses that short in a while Keep it up.

 

Pretty good!