Falling Further

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    Falling Further

    Stop picking on me,
    Just leave it out,
    I’m fragile enough,
    My mind’s full of doubt,
    Take the hate out of your heart,
    And create all these words,
    Poison my drink,
    Take a grip on my throat,

    And now I’m on my own,
    You’ve taken control,
    And I’ve got nothing to say,
    It’s all been taken away,
    I’m falling further,
    And further,

    Do you want to quit,
    Or would you rather take my life,
    I wear my own crown,
    And it’s one of a wretch,
    Make a hole in my heart,
    And pick at what’s left,
    Hate me some more,
    Then go slit my wrists,

    And now I’m on my own,
    You’ve taken control,
    And I’ve got nothing to say,
    It’s all been taken away,
    I’m falling further,
    And further,

    Further and further.


    thoughts please...
     
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    fallenangel

    fallenangel Well-Known Member

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    this is good. i think the first verse is the strongest one. ;)
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Good job.
     
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    Glue

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    nice
     

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