Disillusioned I lost something i once valued today A trust that was never supposed to be misplaced Truth can cut deeper than any human knife And Ill take this tension to topple your life Everyone struggles to have somewhere to rest Every soul wants a place to rest its head I settled just like the rest of them did But I never knew it would do me like this I cant believe, that I thought you were like me I shouldve listened harder to what it is you bleed I was too blind and now its come back swingin its not true when you say that you are tryin You fooled me with a mistake that I will never see This lie has gotten the best of everything But I can say now that youre dead to me I wont shed a tear but i wont be laughing How many more people do you want to hurt I tried to get them out but theyre part of this world You drew a line in the sand to cut me out But I wont give up on my life like that Ill call out my own mistakes loud and proud Just to take away what you could say now If Im gonna disappear from your fake interests The actions will be my own work and we could end it I cant believe, that I thought you were like me I shouldve listened harder to what it is you bleed I was too blind and now its come back to kill me its not true when you say that you are trying You fooled me with a mistake I will never see This lie has gotten the best of everything But I can say now that youre dead to me I wont shed a tear but i wont be laughing Ill be the first to admit that Im not perfect I never claimed that my own thoughts were urgent The sickness to you, is that you have to be better You have to make what you do, seem so much bigger Youve become my enemy and you know its true And I dont want to associate with someone like you With someone who never stops talking with words of poison itd be different if people started speaking of #### youve done Things would be hell for people like you To have your own laundry be aired for public view Take yourself and get away from me I dont have patience for snakes crawling near me
I really like this one. It's probably my favorite out of all the ones that you've done. Very easy to relate to. I especially like the line "I won't shed a tear but I won't be laughing" Just caught my attention.
very nice moral to it, and even admitting your not perfect, you keep things balanced and it doesnt become a self-rightious hate fest, instead you do a very good job of keeping it grounded. very nice rhymes here, good job all around