Darkness

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    linktolinkinpark

    linktolinkinpark Well-Known Member

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    cast dark shadow's through the darkness,
    I've never ever felt something like this
    watching word's of wisdom fade
    cast dark shadow's through the darkness,
    being with you is my only wish

    When we come out of this darkness,
    into your eye's i will stare
    finding truth behind the lies
    for i know it is there
    and, when we come out of this darkness,
    I will stand i will fight
    being stronger then ever
    for I know it is right

    cast dark shadow's through the darkness
    cold and lonley, your my only
    watch you stand watch you fight
    and, cast dark shadow's through the darkness
    dark and scary, I am wary

    When we come out of this darkness,
    into your eye's i will stare
    finding truth behind the lies
    for i know it is there
    and, when we come out of this darkness,
    I will stand i will fight
    being stronger then ever
    for I know it is right
     
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    Mrs.Shinoda

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    i think it's really good!!! keep up the good work!
     
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    linktolinkinpark

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    Tank u!!!!!!!!!!! :mike:
     
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    Anya

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    You may wanna make it more..I dunno make the words more deeper kinda. Your story line isn't much of something I can relate too. But don't get me wrong...I like it. I bet as you progress they'll get even better. ;)
     
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    Methybrea

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    Good job! :mike:
     

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