Some of My Lyrics ' My lyrics are terrible. Please read them and discuss my ignorance and incompetence. no i'm not being modest, i want you to help me grow.
How's this .... you need to work on them ... :whistle: Well, the "lifelike" one is quite good ... "I'll handle life my own way" would be better .
i don't know if you misunderstood, but i was wondering why the song "lifelike" is better than the others. i know i made a mistake on the one line, i see that it does sound dumb. i wrote these awhile ago in my immature days. anyway, i don't like "lifelike" as much because the lyrics are like a lot of other stuff on the radio, uses a lot of the same vocab. plus, lifelike has almost zero imagery. "Raise you hands up high if you know that you're a disgrace. Now the dirt shall vanish without a trace. If your hands are down, you're nothing but a liar and a fake. I pray for a more humble world where we can realize our mistakes." this is probably the only part of my own work that i would endorse at the present time. the rest of it was written without much effort(relatively), with little creative thought(relatively). i will elaborate on this song and post more of my present work soon. thank you for your input.