I crave your attention, you're shamed to know me Looks can decieve you but thats all you see I need to find the answer some way Why do I try when you just push away? Beauty and perfection-signifigant to you I see that as the reason that I'm looked through Beauty is what I crave, I hold it in the eyes of some, But all I desire is to hold it in the eyes of one I sink into the corner as I watch you pass by You push me away without having to try You reek of negativity towards the unpretty You crave the beautiful, the perfect, the witty You've hurt me more than ever this time I don't want to lose you, though you're not mine Beauty is what I crave, I hold it in the eyes of some, But all I desire is to hold it in the eyes of one
I cannot believe nobody's commented on this. It's truly a great piece and I can tell that it was directed towards someone cause I get the feeling you are hateful/spiteful of the person when I read your poem. Great job Trish, 10/10.
Wow, very nice. 9/10 (only cause I can't get the full vibe cause I'm a guy, if I was a chick I'd give you 10/10 )
Heeeey! Thanks! [/b][/quote] I deleted the post you didn't make. Kick the ass of the guy who was on your PC so it wont happen anymore.
I deleted the post you didn't make. Kick the ass of the guy who was on your PC so it wont happen anymore. [/b][/quote] :wth: She made that post to bump the topic. It was a joke.
:wth: She made that post to bump the topic. It was a joke. [/b][/quote] I was trying to be a nice guy.
comin back...it's really nice...can relate to it if you get what i mean...but really looks don't matter ...and for you and your awesome work...it's your skills that should make you proud! a job well done!!!
I read this a while back and I told you how great it was, but I forgot to post it here. 10/10, Trish, and good luck with everything! :hugz: Consider this a 'bump' too.